Today I will write about Iwasaki castle. it is not known when it was built but built in Muromachi era, about 500 years ago by Oda Nobunaga. At iwasaki castle, we can take a public lecture about iwasaki castle, we can take a walk at Iwasaki castle and there is stamp rally. if we finish collecting stamp, we can get present.
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Very interesting. I feel like visiting the castle after reading your posting.
You wrote "today I will write about iwasaki castle". You need to capitalize tody and Iwasaki. Mromachi era doesn't make much sense to international students. Write the year when it was built. What do you mean by "we can look into the conditions of Iwasaki castle"? What is "stamp sally"?
I think it's easy to read.
I could understand and I want to go there.
But perhaps, foreigners don't know stamp rally..
And Please check Capital letters(＾＾)☆
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